From 3170f5da8e34dfe63df27f9fb281a31909f03eed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stephan Schneider Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 14:54:43 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 01/10] Update 1.md - typo --- pages/tokipona/1.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/pages/tokipona/1.md b/pages/tokipona/1.md index a59f4f1..4acd373 100644 --- a/pages/tokipona/1.md +++ b/pages/tokipona/1.md @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ The vocabulary for this page: | word | meaning | |-------|---------------------------------| -| mi | i, me, us | +| mi | I, me, us | | sina | you | | ona | he, she, they, it | | li | (between subj. and verb/adj.) | From dae2d70d55a5fc9d83d80709c5bb2c6ce801006f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stephan Schneider Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 15:34:14 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 02/10] Update 6.md - lon sinpin mi = in front of me --- pages/tokipona/6.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/pages/tokipona/6.md b/pages/tokipona/6.md index 91b6aaa..8797066 100644 --- a/pages/tokipona/6.md +++ b/pages/tokipona/6.md @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ And here are some examples of the location words: > ona li lon monsi sina. -- They are behind you. -> jan utala mute li lon sinpin. -- Warriors are standing in front of me. +> jan utala mute li lon sinpin mi. -- Warriors are standing in front of me. > lipu suli li lon sinpin ni. -- An important document is on this wall. From 70f36b96502f9d87827fec48a63b0ee9f707cc1c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stephan Schneider Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 16:00:31 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 03/10] Update 7.md - According to 3.md, "appearance" is expressed as "visually" - "lukin" (modifier). 6.md has "sama lukin pipi" - "looks like a bug". For consistency, "looks (just) like you" should be "sama (mute) lukin sina". --- pages/tokipona/7.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/pages/tokipona/7.md b/pages/tokipona/7.md index 8444326..cb00449 100644 --- a/pages/tokipona/7.md +++ b/pages/tokipona/7.md @@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ And try to translate the following sentences into toki pona. > * mi toki insa e ni: jan sewi li lon ala. > * o kalama ala lon tomo lipu. > * jan lawa mi li toki e ni: o lape ala lon tomo pali. -> * jan sama mije sina li lukin sama mute sina. +> * jan sama mije sina li sama mute lukin sina. > * o tawa ala lon ma. [Previous page](6.html) [Top page](index.html) [Next page](8.html) From 62b52008fe35c4bf7da34f9e2d93298da4928fb8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stephan Schneider Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 16:09:33 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 04/10] Update 9.md - typo --- pages/tokipona/9.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/pages/tokipona/9.md b/pages/tokipona/9.md index a16afab..0c42a88 100644 --- a/pages/tokipona/9.md +++ b/pages/tokipona/9.md @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ The vocabulary for this page: | lete | cold, raw | | musi | entertaining, artistic, fun, game| -Time to introduce two another particles in this language: "pi" and "la". +Time to introduce two other particles in this language: "pi" and "la". ## pi From 54008f68ab917c981d6b419de28472f650f06223 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stephan Schneider Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 16:12:14 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 05/10] Update 9.md - (,) la in the official book --- pages/tokipona/9.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/pages/tokipona/9.md b/pages/tokipona/9.md index 0c42a88..c190431 100644 --- a/pages/tokipona/9.md +++ b/pages/tokipona/9.md @@ -118,8 +118,8 @@ Or be used to link multiple sentences: The official book, different online courses and my personal style differ on how to place punctuation in sentences that use "la". -The official book sometimes uses a comma before "la" and sometimes uses no -punctuation. +The official book uses a comma before "la" when it combines two sentences and uses no +punctuation otherwise. The "12 days of sona pi toki pona" video series uses no punctuation in all cases (and so did the "o kama sona e toki pona!" course). From 4fcd5890fcd158e161a8a6a7c431219243e9bdd7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stephan Schneider Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 16:26:55 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 06/10] Update 9.md - "to break" (intransitive) would be "kama pakala" --- pages/tokipona/9.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/pages/tokipona/9.md b/pages/tokipona/9.md index c190431..4e82b05 100644 --- a/pages/tokipona/9.md +++ b/pages/tokipona/9.md @@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ And try to translate the following sentences into toki pona. > * In this house, I speak toki pona and English. > * If you eat raw meat, it will be bad for your body. > * Their music ("entertaining sounds") is very good. -> * If you misuse ("use badly") the tools, they will break. +> * If you misuse ("use badly") the tools, they will break ("be broken"). > %spoiler% > * sewi li pimeja la o awen lon tomo. From 7eb9f25b5be19f7e50fab504755fc16d0bb8ea3e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stephan Schneider Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 16:33:48 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 07/10] Update 10.md - "pali e ona" --- pages/tokipona/10.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/pages/tokipona/10.md b/pages/tokipona/10.md index 7302b56..de80f16 100644 --- a/pages/tokipona/10.md +++ b/pages/tokipona/10.md @@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ And try to translate the following sentences into toki pona. > * If you're on a hill, you can see many things. > %spoiler% -> * sina sona ala sona pali ona? / sina sona pali ona anu seme? +> * sina sona ala sona pali e ona? / sina sona pali e ona anu seme? > * ale li ken. > * sina ken ala ken open e lupa? / sina ken open e lupa anu seme? > * sina kute ala e jan sona la pali sina li ike. From e0384d896d1e222fa3bf47d8d34b533f4b4fcb3d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stephan Schneider Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 16:42:08 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 08/10] Update 11.md - tenpo pimeja la - at night; tenpo pimeja ni la - tonight --- pages/tokipona/11.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/pages/tokipona/11.md b/pages/tokipona/11.md index 9bbdc32..a80d2ef 100644 --- a/pages/tokipona/11.md +++ b/pages/tokipona/11.md @@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ And try to translate the following sentences into toki pona. > %spoiler% > * mi lon tomo nanpa mute luka tu pi nasin Wasintan. > * ilo pi sitelen tawa li toki e ni: tenpo suno kama la suno li lon. -> * tenpo pimeja la lete li lon. +> * tenpo pimeja ni la lete li lon. > * (tenpo mun / tenpo sike mun) nanpa luka li (pona / suwi). > * sina jo e ijo mute pi kalama musi a! From 16582c50c83d7b6d090021fbe155a3d0b1661772 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stephan Schneider Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 16:43:09 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 09/10] Update 11.md - typo ijo/ilo --- pages/tokipona/11.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/pages/tokipona/11.md b/pages/tokipona/11.md index a80d2ef..83101ff 100644 --- a/pages/tokipona/11.md +++ b/pages/tokipona/11.md @@ -155,6 +155,6 @@ And try to translate the following sentences into toki pona. > * ilo pi sitelen tawa li toki e ni: tenpo suno kama la suno li lon. > * tenpo pimeja ni la lete li lon. > * (tenpo mun / tenpo sike mun) nanpa luka li (pona / suwi). -> * sina jo e ijo mute pi kalama musi a! +> * sina jo e ilo mute pi kalama musi a! [Previous page](10.html) [Top page](index.html) [Next page](12.html) From 3a94f4952ed1290837a31ff341a392c7175af5ab Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Stephan Schneider Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 16:49:37 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 10/10] Update 12.md - On page 7 of Sonja's book, "pu" is used as a noun ("pu la ..."). So, not its noun-ness is unofficial, but it's "the official Toki Pona book"-ness is. --- pages/tokipona/12.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/pages/tokipona/12.md b/pages/tokipona/12.md index 9b2c0e9..f762b6d 100644 --- a/pages/tokipona/12.md +++ b/pages/tokipona/12.md @@ -43,8 +43,8 @@ But, when added at the beginning of a sentence, it means "but" or "however": > explaining certain ideas, or how communities differ in using them. In the official dictionary, "pu" is only defined as "interacting with the -official Toki Pona book". Usage of this word as a noun, while common among some -users, is unofficial. +official Toki Pona book". Usage of this word as "the official Toki Pona book" +itself, while common among some users, is unofficial. ## Exercises